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let this presence never end by ~AngelOnMyBedroomwall:iconAngelOnMyBedroomwall:



First glance of  eyes,
first evening they met
felt like it was meant to be
to fall in love
end up in bed


But only did they sleep,
after so many sleepless nights
she finaly got some rest

his arm around her wastle,
her head upon his chest


Impossible it seemed,
yet so easy it was to do
both sticking together
never could she've dreamed
to find someone like you

Now she's his first
hoping he's her last
her private angel
making life wonderful
forget about the past

but still she's got to be cautionous
not wanting it all too fast

Here they both lay again
in the attic filled with light
but now they're only half-dressed

with his arms around her wastle
and her head upon his chest
:iconangelonmybedroomwall:

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feels good to know you love someone

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:iconchristenart:
i really love this, truly. definitely worth a fav.

incredible, Elise. and this fits my girlfriend so well..

its like you know me personally, I swear.

another impressive poem!

--
Either let me fly, or give me death
Let my soul rest, take my breath
If I don't fly I'ma die anyway, I'ma live on
But I'll be gone any day. - DMX
:iconangelonmybedroomwall:
ghee thnx:)
it's meant to be a song so I'll send you a link when we've recorded it :)

--
* it's just a star
:iconchristenart:
oh right on I'd love to hear it!

--
Either let me fly, or give me death
Let my soul rest, take my breath
If I don't fly I'ma die anyway, I'ma live on
But I'll be gone any day. - DMX
:iconangelonmybedroomwall:
ok:) will send when ready

--
* it's just a star
:iconcocoa-strs-brkn-hrts:
i liek it good job

--
~he wears his heart safety pinned to his backpack, his back is all
that he knows. shot down by strangers whose glances can
cripple the heart and devour the soul.

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